hi cyan its your best friend madds from wigram primary school i like how you have done the second part of you story i sore that you have continued on from your other half of the story. next time i think you should add a little bit more detailed into your last half of the story and maybe you could add a little bit more of what they did after.
how did you come up with this half of the story? from madds
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hi cyan
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i like how you have done the second part of you story i sore that you have continued on from your other half of the story. next time i think you should
add a little bit more detailed into your last half of the story and maybe you could add a little bit more of what they did after.
how did you come up with this half of the story?
from madds