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Wednesday, July 3, 2019

Can he save her???

1 comment:

  1. hi cyan
    its your best friend madds from wigram primary school
    i like how you have done the second part of you story i sore that you have continued on from your other half of the story. next time i think you should
    add a little bit more detailed into your last half of the story and maybe you could add a little bit more of what they did after.

    how did you come up with this half of the story?
    from madds

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