hi cyan , I like your story because you place were it is , and you have some twists.But I think that you could have told us a bit more about your characters. but overall it was a good story , from your best friend ,skyla
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hi cyan ,
ReplyDeleteI like your story because you place were it is , and you have some twists.But I think that you could have told us a bit more about your characters.
but overall it was a good story ,
from your best friend ,skyla